Excellent poem. I loved the rhyming scheme you put into it.
Billy I really like you poem about fall and just reading it made me feel in a fall mode. I like the picture (i used it too).
I have seen many poems. Nice job. I think this is amazing. It is all about fall, my favorite season.
Awesome! This reads like an expanded form of haiku.
Once a boy from a small town in Connecticut. Now a young man in Massachusetts.