good post Billy, the image is nice, but I feel like the the poem seems to come out a bit to sentence like. Sorry if this seems to come out harsh, I just want to give a fellow student some advise.
I love these haikus. They are simple but deep, just like a haiku should be.
Deep and simple just like Sid said. These are very good and powerful .
Live rob said, these are very simple haikus, yet very deep. Great job.
Great job using imagery on top of actions. You should post these in your haiku portfolio.
Once a boy from a small town in Connecticut. Now a young man in Massachusetts.