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Getting Back to It

9/22/2014

4 Comments

 
Plucking Strings


I lift one finger up and put one back down
I move my hand around
clutching the pick in my hand


The Crack


I lift my stick and plunge it toward the ground
it hits the ice and crunches under the force 
I pick back up the jagged stick and toss it aside


Software


With a change as great as last
I would've expected more
but got less than I had before
4 Comments
Rob
09/24/2014 5:34pm

I liked how you did not tell us what was happening in each poem but left us to figure it out. I think I got all of them but you never know and that is what I like about it. Nice job on this and a hope to read some of your poems in the future.

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Hal
09/24/2014 6:53pm

These are great. You are very creative. Nice job Billy.

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Alex
09/24/2014 8:07pm

Very thorough billy! Good feeling in your writing.

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Mickey
09/26/2014 3:57am

I love the guitar one. Very descriptive and deep haikus. Good Job!

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