Great video essay Billy. I really liked how you did the "video panorama" of the pond. It was almost like as the camera went around the pond, your video essay covered Walden. Your voice was clear, and your points about the reading were clever and insightful. Nice work.
I agree with Zack where I like the video of walking around the pond I really captures the beauty Walden pond. I also like the beginning about "a picture is worth a thousand words and I book like walden is worth 1000 pictures." Great job Billy and I look forward for what you have to bring in the future.
Your words were put together so thoughtfully and planned out, but I felt like the video around Walden Pond got boring at points and it would have been better to add some other pictures. Nice job!
Good Post. It was a bit lengthy and I felt it kind of hard to stick through it. Other than that, the video essay was great. Next time to to held the reader in a bit more.
It is one of the best, your vice is great. I remember your video essay is similar to your last year. You middle piece about the visit into walden is great.
This is a thoughtful and insightful video. I think it would benefit from rerecording the audio (it feels like you are reading, not reciting, and maybe some background music to keep the flow going. Otherwise it is awesome.
Once a boy from a small town in Connecticut. Now a young man in Massachusetts.